I respect the effort
Hmmm, a "new style of animation"? Maybe for you...
Don't get me wrong but you invented "hot water"...
I expected a more meaningful story, not just random objects made out of words...
Some colours blend with the bg and were hard to read, and some objects ( a man for an example ) moved too fast to "read all of the parts".
This could be done in actionScript, it would probably take 5 days to make the engine, but after that, it would be much easier to make ASCII animations with it.
Anyhow, put some more work into the story, and this will be a decent movie.
You don't have to "read all of the parts," you just need to see the object they make up. Yes, it is a new style of animation. And no, I didn't invent hot water, I invented dry water.
Q.C. Passed :)
Heh, this was pretty good, to say at least.
The scenes and the progression of the story are very well executed and thought of. You've introduced every element into the story, and managed to keep it simple and interesting.
The animation could be slightly better, and some scenes could be a little shorter imo.
Anyway, good work. Keep it up.
Looks ok, but
the graphic could be better, sound quality too, also using a commercial music is considered stealing, especially if you don't credit the musician.
Simply awesome, the animation, the characters, music sounds story, action scenes, directing... everything, simply awesome.
I'm gonna look for the other chapters now. And you just keep 'em coming.
Very well done!
It started as promising lil' movie, but it's simply just way too short. I liked the style, and the story, but 1Mb for 30s of a non-frameByFrame movie?
My Short Story About Love is almost three minutes long and it's around 94Kb, and after I added music it is around 300Kb...
I expected more from 1Mb, but I also expect - the sequel... ;)
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